First of all, the design itself is great and looks good About the typography part, I find it rather unfortunate to write the word WITHIN backward, since each letter's shape is the exactly same when mirrored. For that reason, I'm quite sure without the same deviation caption here at devART, only from the image, most of us would read FALLEN NIHTIW and possibly take the second word as an unique name, since there are no И or Я letter to make the backward lettering obvious.
But don't get me wrong, I like the design and even the confusing-at-first-sight typography can't decrease it's aesthetic.
Wow..this is simply a gorgeous piece I am astonished at how much detail you put into your pieces you are truly talented. May I ask if you also create your own brushes for projects such as these just curious as they are stunning as well.